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is it truth?
its it lies?
am I me?
am I a lie?
what is life?
what is death?
why do I ask
for what I cannot get?
if life is hard
is it worth living?
why do you cry
while I laugh?
you have had
no harder life,
than anyone I know,
you are the same
in everyway
so why you?
could I have as easily
lost my own life?
lost my ways, my loves, my soul?
you have not died,
at least not yet
can you be saved?
if you can and are
will I be damned?
life has been no harder on you
than it has on me,
so why?
why do you cry
while I laugh?
is it your fault?
is it mine?
©2007-2009 ~EmberNekoNinja
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just a random poem not much to say about it I guess but this about yet another friend XD yeah I know I have issues but anyways.... yeah hope you enjoyed it and please comment and give me some feedback ^-^
~*~Ember~*~
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You sure seem to have a lot of issues with your friends :D
I like this one, all those question really give a dynamic to this poem, meke it more expressive and with more feelings
Nice work :)

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Putting the "Fun" back into "Funeral"! Since 1990
lol yea you could say that XD thanks for the comment

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"Being random is like drinking a cup of tea, you never know what will jump out and try to eat you."
~EmberNekoNinja

copy and paste this onto your siggy and show how random you are! ^-^
You're welcome :)

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