is it truth?
its it lies?
am I me?
am I a lie?
what is life?
what is death?
why do I ask
for what I cannot get?
if life is hard
is it worth living?
why do you cry
while I laugh?
you have had
no harder life,
than anyone I know,
you are the same
in everyway
so why you?
could I have as easily
lost my own life?
lost my ways, my loves, my soul?
you have not died,
at least not yet
can you be saved?
if you can and are
will I be damned?
life has been no harder on you
than it has on me,
so why?
why do you cry
while I laugh?
is it your fault?
is it mine?















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I like this one, all those question really give a dynamic to this poem, meke it more expressive and with more feelings
Nice work
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